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So I finished Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell, a book that often gets called "Harry Potter for adults" -- which seems like a vague insult directed at the many adult Potter fans.

But it's easy to see why the comparison gets made. Both are a mix of comic and dark, both centre on magicians in Britain, both are crammed with plot twists, and Jonathan Strange was published in time to ride the wave of Harry Potter popularity.

Overall, I'm with most people who compared both books -- Jonathan Strange is the better work overall in terms of craft, but with some reservations. And even though I think Susanna Clarke is the better writer, I still like Rowling better because she seems to understand things Clarke doesn't.

One major difference between the two series is that Jonathan Strange takes place in an alternate universe where magic isn't underground, just a lost art.

It follows the story of two rival magicians -- the careful, neurotic control-freak Mr. Norrell, and his daring, impulsive, and unstable opponent Jonathan Strange, both of whom want to bring magic back into the world. Strange is pushing magic into dangerous places, Norrell is trying to contain his enemies, and a very nasty fairy is interfering in both their lives.

Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell is a more poetic book than the Potter series. It's more concise and tightly written and better plotted. The characters are just as engaging -- though Rowling's got a few matchless characters that are better than Clarke's best. For the most part it's just a better work of fiction. There aren't any atrocious house elves, no dull and cheesy romances, or any other of the dross which really hurt Rowling's later books.

Clarke's magic is better, too. Rowling's magic is book magic -- say the words, wave the wand, and something happens. That kind exists in Clarke, too, but it's the lesser, weaker version. There's another kind of magic there, richer and more animist that almost borders on Ursula LeGuin. Rowling overexplains, overlimits, and makes her magic overly logical. Clarke leaves room for wonder. Clarke's feels more real.

However, there's one place where Rowling really outshines Clarke, and that's when it comes to the minorities in her world.

The creepiest thing in Clarke for me wasn't the dark magic or the descriptions of Faerie. It was the moments built around Stephen Black and the fairy gentlemen.

The depiction of Stephen throughout the novel was a real problem for me. A lot of the time she seemed to be finding ways to stave off accusations of racism, but it's hard not to see racism here. She has the convenient excuse that he's "enchanted," but Stephen does spend the entire novel playing a kind of Vaudevillian sidekick to the fairy gentleman, and enchantment or not that's a problem.

(And why is he enchanted anyway? The fairy gentleman has to use ancient and powerful magic to enslave the two white women, but just basically waves his hand and enchants Stephen. Are black people more susceptible to magic in her world? Maybe she considers them weaker-willed?)

It's also a problem that Stephen resentment of his white master is portrayed as completely unjustified, merely something excited in him by the fairy gentleman to serve his own purposes.

And that brings us to the fairy gentleman himself, and the queerer aspects of the story. And there are queer aspects to the story -- it's mentioned in a footnote early on that the Raven King was supposed to have kidnapped attractive men and women and enslave them as his lovers, so he's essentially a bisexual predator, and there is that poor sea captain who puts on a dress and is instantly struck dead by a murderous fairy.

The fairy gentleman follows in that pattern. Mincing, effeminate, unstable, degenerate, and sociopathic, and constantly fawning over how good-looking Stephen is, he's a type of the homosexual from many Victorian novels, and the same type that filtered later on into Hollywood movies. The last two hundred years of literature and film are filled with that that version of the homosexual. He always dies at the end, and the audience is always expected to cheer.

True, homosexuality never made explicit with the fairy gentleman. But it's become popular now to indulge in stereotyping by shifting the stereotypes to another, fictional group. Video games and cartoons are full of animals that talk like black men and women from American cities, and who do things everyone would know was racist stereotype if they were their human equivalents. The idea is that if the creators are accused of racism, they can just say, "Oh, but these are just cartoon animals." There's a wink-wink, nudge-nudge thing going on with it.

And same with the fairy gentleman. Anyone who's read through the last two centuries of queer portrayals has seen the same type hundreds of times over, and we know it when we see it.

That's why I've decided that though Clarke might be the better writer in terms of craft, I like Rowling better. True, she's not entirely free of stereotypes herself -- all the black characters are in Gryffindor and play Quidditch, and the only obviously Jewish name (Goldstein) is in Ravenclaw.

But there's no sense that Rowling's trying to wrap the ugliest and most bigoted tropes in a pleasant package to make them acceptable again, either. There's just a nasty undercurrent in Clarke that makes me very uncomfortable.

On a totally different note, Vandana Shiva was on The Current this morning. I first heard about her through David Suzuki's writings -- she's a quantum physicist, an environmental activist, a feminist, and an anti-globalization activist, and I've always been a fan of hers.

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Date: 2009-04-10 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-fish.livejournal.com
I always (predictably) lose literary criticism arguments with you, but I'm a glutton for punishment, so here goes.

Stephen does spend the entire novel playing a kind of Vaudevillian sidekick to the fairy gentleman, and enchantment or not that's a problem.

I didn't see it that way. I saw it as the gentleman keeping Stephen under his thumb. If Stephen is a "sidekick", it's not of his own free will, it's because that's how the gentleman wants him. This is supposed to provoke the reader's dismay for the obvious reasons, and I will elaborate even more right now....

(And why is he enchanted anyway? The fairy gentleman has to use ancient and powerful magic to enslave the two white women, but just basically waves his hand and enchants Stephen. Are black people more susceptible to magic in her world? Maybe she considers them weaker-willed?)

Stephen was easily enchanted because the gentleman promised him something he already wanted and could never have had. The white women didn't want for anything and were, for the most part, free to come and go as they pleased. Their desires didn't reach as deep into their psyches, so it was harder for the gentleman to use those desires to get ahold of them. Everyone wants to be respected and free. Stephen's lack of those things was a large and tender vulnerability. That is one of the smaller branches of injustice that great injustices like slavery creates; people who are dehumanized are more willing to debase themselves because they are desperate and have nothing to lose. Bumfights are a good real-life example of this phenomenon.

It's also a problem that Stephen resentment of his white master is portrayed as completely unjustified, merely something excited in him by the fairy gentleman to serve his own purposes.

I think that was necessary to retain the tone of the book; it's no surprise to me that a Victorian-style book would have Victorian-style attitudes. To portray something is not to condone it.

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Date: 2009-04-12 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maidenofirisa.livejournal.com
I did not read the spoiler part yet because I've only read about a third of the book. I started reading it a while ago but for some reason I stopped and now I can't get into it again.

My goal is to try and finish it before the end of the summer.

Comparing it to Harry Potter so far is a bit difficult... I guess I can see how people would compare them and maybe prefer this one but I'll wait until I've finished reading to really say what I think.

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Date: 2009-04-14 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] esprix.livejournal.com
Hmmm. I'd seen the book here and there but hadn't heard much about it. After all that, do you think it's worth a read?

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Date: 2009-04-14 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkelf105.livejournal.com
Hiya! I was journal hopping and bored and stumbled across your journal and I really, really love your review of Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell, because while, I liked the novel quite a bit, it felt wobbly. You seem interesting! I hope you don't mind that I friended you.

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